Struggling on with these boards, had a breakthrough just last night with one of the scenes so I drew some new roughs. We were struggling with the layout for the introduction of the boy at the swing, and how in God's name we were going to get the girl stained red without having to force her to run through the puddle of red the ball had made. Instead we've gone for her being splashed by the ball as it bounces nearby. It fixes everything, and looks a lot nice, AND we get to have a bouncing ball in the sequence. Animation 101 here we come!