Been working on them since last Monday, and I think (after ten or so months of rewrites) we've finally settled on the story! Now it's onto making a Production Chart, and then Layouts next week with Suba. The only thing missing from these boards are the SFX notes and working out the timing - which I did actually sit and work out, but managed to work out wrong the first time round. They will get added in later, when I get that all reorganised and fixed.
Anyway, enjoy! Hope they make sense.
x L
These are looking great, makes sense and from what I can see the pacing seems to work. I particularly like the line:
ReplyDelete" the teddy bear is a useless seesaw companion..."
Very amusing.
The panels on the round about are a lot clearer now and gives a far clearer explanation of the effect that you are all going for.
Great work.
-P.